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Hey now, Princess
Why do you always worry?
Rest on my shoulder
You don't need to hurry

Hey now, Baby
No need to cry
You want the truth
Not a lie

Hey now, Sweetheart
I know how it hurts
They want you to change
But you don't gotta convert

Hey now, Honey
Your bruises are showing
But when the going gets tough
The tough get going

Hey now, Princess
I'm cut up too
I've been here all this time
Fighting just for you.
Thinking of a friend and a story~~~
Love always
Melody Pond:music:
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rebelnijamaster Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Student Writer
Beautiful poem! :)
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RiverSong0708 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks much, sweetie;)
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JessilynAllenDilla Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Student General Artist
nice poem
it also reminds me of bluebird
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RiverSong0708 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Student Writer
I must check out this aloof Bluebird!XD
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JessilynAllenDilla Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Student General Artist
well you can read her bio as soon as i put it up shes just really complex ...and sad i only got a very small part of the first chapter up but feel free to read it
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RiverSong0708 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Student Writer
Oh, I definitely well!:D
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Alakittynya Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This touches me personally~ :iconawwwplz: :iconloveitplz:
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RiverSong0708 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Student Writer
I'm glad:3:heart:~
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Usagi017 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Student Writer
this is so pretty, and it flows so well, i love that in a poem. its really beautiful, you can definitely tell and feel your emotions for the person you are writing it for. i like it, good job.
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:iconriversong0708:
RiverSong0708 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you very much, sweetie:D
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Usagi017 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Student Writer
you are so very welcome! :D
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cripplesix92 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012
Very simple but effective, and I dig your codes and keys avatar
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RiverSong0708 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Student Writer
Thank ya' and thank ya';)~
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cripplesix92 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012
most def, and i love me some death cab :D
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r0llercoazter Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I really like the ending, and the whole piece is wonderful. Gives one a soothing feeling. C:
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RiverSong0708 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks:D
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DaisyLover87 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012
This is a very relaxing poem, and it's very peaceful, too. Would be awesome to have someplace to rest like this, with someone there...
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RiverSong0708 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you very much:D And actually, this poem is about how God is always there for me, even when I think I'm walking alone:heart:~
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DaisyLover87 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012
:-) I love that about it. 'Tis true He is always there, even when we don't feel like it...I was drawing from a longing to have a physical someone there, too, I think...
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RiverSong0708 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Student Writer
*sigh*me too:(.... I have never been in a relationship(even if I was asked out or something I would say no, I'm not dating till college).
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DaisyLover87 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012
That's a good promise to make, actually. Gives you more time to be ready and enjoy your time as a young adult. Mind if I ask how old you are? Or what year in school you are?

I've been in several different relationships...they started in college, and have gone from there.
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RiverSong0708 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Student Writer
Not at all! I am fifteen(almost sixteen!) and a Sophomore in highschool. You?
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DaisyLover87 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012
I'm a bit older. A college graduate at twenty-four. :-) If you have any questions about what we've been talking about, feel free to ask. I can definitely understand where you're at with wanting a relationship, especially when your friends might be in ones. It's even more so at my age, when most of my friends are married with kids already.
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RiverSong0708 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you very much:)~
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EllaKey Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It makes me want to draw a picture.
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RiverSong0708 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Student Writer
Do it! That would rock! And thanks;)
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EllaKey Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
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ADayIn Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Professional General Artist
How sweet~
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RiverSong0708 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you:)
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ADayIn Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Professional General Artist
You're welcome!
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RockLiver24 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012
Oh wow, i'm not usually into poems like this but it's really great!
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RiverSong0708 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Student Writer
I'm glad that you like it!:D:heart:~
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charmgal27 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
best lines: Hey now, Princess
I'm cut up too
I've been here all this time
Fighting just for you.

TOO CUTE T.T
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RiverSong0708 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Student Writer
Actually, me too, I really like those lines:) and thank you very much!:hug:
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charmgal27 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Haha no probs! (:
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summerday27 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww. Adorable :aww:
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RiverSong0708 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks hun!:iconepicclapplz:
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summerday27 Featured By Owner May 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome :D
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EmoRapunzel Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very sweet ^w^
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RiverSong0708 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you very much, sweetie:iconlachoir:~
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Saigen-naku Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Student Writer
This is very sweet. ^^
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RiverSong0708 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you, I'm glad:la:
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Saigen-naku Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Student Writer
You're very welcome. ;3
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EmberSan Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it.
It has something speacial about it.
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RiverSong0708 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Student Writer
Why thanks, sweetie:love:
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EmberSan Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Anytime~
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NykiiLynn Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
awwwwwwwwwwwwww *tears up a bit*
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RiverSong0708 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Student Writer
Aw, thanks, sweetie:3
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TheMoorMaiden Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I like the song-like quality to this. :) It's very charming.
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RiverSong0708 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks, dearest:D
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